omag0d ..that was amazing!!! ..ive nevah read nefing like that before ..i dunt even know how to explain it, its just so .. mind blowing, kp it up!

oooo i like tht yea lol thnx for commentin i like comments
very interestin subject
xoxo
Jenna

wow I like this poem alot, its really good. By the way thanks for commenting on my poem.

that was amazing. truely wonderful. you have a way with words. you are an excellent writer! keep writing!! 5/5 (it deserves a 10 though!)

~Manda

hey girl
you are really talented and this poem says a lot about ur talent keep up the good work girly

Holy shit! that was amazing!!! i was literally on the end of my seat freeking out! you create such vivid images, i love it and gave you 5/5. awesome poem hun!
luv courtie

This was a rlly awesome poem,it was a little unusual but still rlly good

Wow.... the poem is amazing. it really keeps your attention... most poems i read i read like the first stanza and get bored but this one got me hook its awesome i really like this poem great job

Very well done! this poem is so refreashing in the sense that you have written about a very unique topic. this poem has a great flow, style and power. great write, keep it up!

Thats soo sadd..i LVOE the way you wrote this..sooo amazing..ur talented keep it up...

Lissa

I loved this!
Everything about it was perfect, you have great talent.

Haha. niiice. I actually thought she would kill herself... Ahwell. Nice story with a few twists.

I thought she was gonna kill herself too >.<
it's written VERY well ^^
it's one of da best I've eva read

keep writing ^^
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