wow i really liked that
really understanding
awsome work
5/5
luv ya

this was a good poem. the way the story changed from sorrow and sadness to happiness was a good trait as well.

I like it alot, its very good.

awsome poem! keep up the work
love, Jessi

Really expressing the part of attempting suicide where theres a moment hesitiation and thinking about the world around you. really good keep it up.
Luv Scarlet xxxx