hey nice poem, its well written !! hope you dont feel that way because i do and its just the worst!
keep writting!

Amazing write I can defiantly relate. Maybe for the title Was Away This Past. I don't know I'm not that good with titles. Anyways 5/5 none to less. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Great poem..Dont know of a name tho..Never stop writting..IT could take u far sumday!

<3 Katie

Good poem... Think you should call it something along the lines of : Fragmented Heart! Good write.