that was rlly good and thanks for rating and commenting on my poem and again that was really good

This is really beautiful, and soooooo sweet, i really like it.
xxx charli xxx ~*~

wow... that's breathtaking!! wow...im speechless... keep up the amazing work!!!
-xXx-

heya. i really liked your poem!! keep writing and maybe one day you will become famous.

That was so romantic! You are an awesome writer! I am just speechless after reading that poem. Wow is really all that i can say. U ROCK is another lol
keep it up

That was so romantic! You are an awesome writer! I am just speechless after reading that poem. Wow is really all that i can say. U ROCK is another lol
keep it up

That was so romantic! You are an awesome writer! I am just speechless after reading that poem. Wow is really all that i can say. U ROCK is another lol
keep it up

wow........that poem was just beautiful. I'm amazed at your talent. When i read it i thought i was reading my own thoughts on love...wishing on the stars...its beautiful...check out mine if u ever have time, i would love to hear ur opinions.
<3 weeping wolf

wow your really an amazing writer youve got the talent babe keep it up

i love you always
xO monica Ox

and rate some more of my poems thanxs

that poem was amazing! thanks for the comment! your such a good writer keep it up!
<3 savanna

another outstanding poem!!!!

good work!!!

I really appreciated the sentiment of the poem. It’s clear that you have a passionate and romantic soul, and I appreciate how you are authentically expressing yourself. There were a couple of grammatical issues that through me; those types of things always take me out of a poem. For example, you said “in which you aspire” when really you aspire to a thing rather than in a thing. If you want your poetry to be clear and straightforward, you were quite successful.

However, never forget that poetry is a crafting of words to evoke a thing rather than clearly state a thing. Check out the lyrics on these two love songs and you’ll see the difference in how love is expressed between a more blatant description and one that is perhaps more poetically crafted even by the same group: 'Somebody' by Depeche Mode (because this poem reminded me in some regards of that song) or 'Enjoy the Silence' by Depeche Mode.

Hey
you asked me to read this when you quoted ma poem..im sorry it's a little late you probably don't even remember..but ya..i really like you poem..you so talented...it almost made me cry lol..well i hope that that special girl will wake up and see that she should be with you because you sound lyk u wud take care of her
=D

Sorry it took me so long to rate your poem. But it was an awesome poem! Keep up the good work.

Hi! WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING LIKE A DREAM I WAS IN...I COULD IMAGINE MYSELF BE THE ONE...WILL THNX FOR COMMENTING MY POEM I THINK IT WAS "SHOULD I" OR "YOU NEVER"...WILL N-E-WAYS I ENJOY READING UR POEMS...I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF UR'S...SO TATA...