Holy Crap this is awesome!

Luke - it is so good to see you writing [forgive my belated response, so much going on]

This is an utterly imaginitive, powerful piece. I love the way you 'out'cry. I just loved every stanza :

young hero - capital zero
awake - bandage tape.

The imagery and the 'pious' rusted soul is so eerily affective that It has taken an entirely beautiful role in this poem. If you get my drift.

Blessings to you my dear Brother!

5/5