Comments : Coldest of hearts

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    once again... i can relate completely... 5/5...again! xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    aww i really liked this one....kinda like my second favorite I dont know..lol...5/5 luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Interesting. Like your style on this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very good. I personally think this should be on your featured. I enjoyed this very much. I liked how you repeated "To" and "Would" at the beginning of a line. The ending was great, a strong ending as well. Well done with this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. i really liked this poem alot because no matter what he does to you or whatever. You'll never be able to let him go. That's like me and my boyfriend i love that kid so much and no matter what he does wrong i will always love him and never want to let him go but anyway this is also sad poem. Anyway keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.