Hey i am a cutter, well trying to stop but its really hard, i get the urge allt he time, i know exactly how you feel, this poem is really good, well done. xxxxxxxx

Sounds oh so familiar. good poem. take care

this is so true i am a cutter so i no exactly wat ur talking about keep up the good work this poem is awesome and its true

this is so true i am a cutter so i no exactly wat ur talking about keep up the good work this poem is awesome and its true

Nyu...Pretty...X3

it was a very satisfying ending line. i always feel bad when I read cutting poems for 2 reasons:
1. because cutting is... well... a very sad thing and
2. because there are so many cutting poems out there that original ones are hard to come by.

I'd say that you run into the traditional problems of originality around the middle of your poem, but a refreshing ending definitely picked this poem up from the above-average place it would have otherwise occupied. You have a nice style, and I think the improvement is sigificantly noticeable, but I also think that if you expanded some of the topics you touched upon it would be easier for more people to connect to a larger body of your poems. that is a personal preference though i suppose.

Good poem. Like it!

As a cutter, I know what you mean. Your peom was really powereful, and emotional. I loved it. Stay strong!

the last line is great. awesome poem.

Woah, powerful, amazing work 5/5

Guys seriously think about it....
being a cutter is NOT a good thing
its not some thing to be proud of
i no u guys say its hard to stop and im sure it is but if u get help or talk to some one about how u feel i KNOW u can sort things out....
2 of friends used to be real depressed and would cut themselves at every moment but they got help..they spoke out..and now they regret ever doing it..they say the scars are a hideuos reminders of there old lives..
please try and do some thing ull thank urself wen ur older

great poems by the way i love ur deep words 5/5

xx. marnz .xx