Comments : A Grieving Heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Sad, my dear. My heart goes out to you. Letting some of the anger out will hopefully help you. hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    The way i understand this...it's like having to put everyone else before yourself constantly just so they can have a shoulder to cry on but there's no one left for you to grieve with...it gave me a cold and lonely feeling on the inside.

    I liked the rhyming scheme. I thought it was very unique. :) And the flow was smooth as well.

    Lol, thanks so much for your comment! Yes, i'm only thirteen, but i'm sure that there are greater minds younger than myself.

    You've never been to Georgia?! I've lived here my whole life...but it depends on where you're living. Where i live is the neighborhood that has to get worried about getting shot up with driveby's every week (but it's not so much as a worry anymore, we're used to it) and things like that, but where another part of my family lives, it's just some nice southern comfort. :) You should try and visit here sometime! We have a Six Flags. O.o LOL

    Peaces. //Ari\\

    P.s.- What part of GA does your family live?

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    JJ, another moving poem. I feel your emotion. Excellent job.