Great rhythm throughout the poem. I can really relate to the poem and that's the best sign of a great poem.

Thank you for sharing its really good.

good poems. its full of emotion.

I just read ur post on the message board and i replied. that was a really great poem, from reading the message board thingy i can c how u feel. great way of expressing urself. keep up the good work. and dont do anything u don't want to.
xoxo michelle

i like you poem, it has so much truth to it, i can relate.

Great poem 5/5!!!! I'm assuming this is to do with the on the forum. Do what YOU think is right. Don't be pressured in to doing things you don't feel secure with. xx

Great peice, has a strong rhythum thoughout and some very powerfully expressed feeling.

5/5