i thought it was a good poem and you expressed your feelings in it very well...keep writing and take care

That poem was very well writtin. It has a great deal of emotions that subside to one another which isnt always good in a relationship. I wish you the best of luck. And welcome to Poems and Quotes!

-Jennifer. (mistressxsork)

This is a really strong poem. Deep with a lot of emotion. Good job dude.

Awsome. *pats you on the back* feel better! [maybe ^_^] 5/5

I like it, really deep and great writing. Keep writing.

Great work hunn! Keep up the writing. 5/5 :)

Forever Wilted,
Black~Rose