nice to learn the new style, sounds like it's hard to write, at least to me it does! you did it wonderfully. but drinking solves no problems only creates more, i know from family experiance to which seems to repeat it's self every summer.

~PLP~ lil slam~

Dear Jacklyn,

Thanks for the comments and advice on drinking. Fortunately I do not have a drinking problem. This was merely choosen a the topic subject for the poem.

Regards,

Steve

S

Firstly, I'm sorry it's taken so long to have a look at your work, the silly site hasn't been working properly for me for a while!

Secondly, I love this!

While the topic is somewhat overdone (I'm guilty of this myself) you manage to keep the piece original and fresh, and this is a style I've never seen before, so it's something I want to try!

It looks someqhat difficult, but you manage to make it look almost easy here.