Good structure and flow. The rhyming wasn't forced, and it was a very creative idea. I really liked it. Great job, 5/5. Take care.

~rolo

wow once again great job....i liked the other one better but this was good too....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

That was an exellent poem and so true! The flow was great and your imagery perfect! Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~

Well done. And quite true. Another fabulouse poem. keep it up.

Very well written, good job

So very true. I'm not famous so I can't speak from experience but I hear stories about famous people just wanting to get out of the spot light and live a normal life. You did excellently in portraying I'm sure, the feelings people living with fame go through. I liked how you touched on all aspects and described them so well. Also, the rhymes flowed and the comparisons worked nicely. I really like this part "Caught like a bird
In an easterly wind
But when your wings fail to fly
It'll come to an end."

Well done!

I would have to say such a very true piece you are such a great imaginitive writer. I don't think it needed to have a strong rhyme cause it all softly flowed great job i'll get some friends to take a look too great job.

Flowed perfectly ... nice piece!

Wow, this is so beautiful, really liked a it a lot, such a unique theme and everything u said is so correct.

well, take care and all the best

Never read a poem abut the downside of fame. Maybe I should send this to one of my friends who's convinced herself that I would be famous.

I liked the flow and everything was just amazing from start to finish. Especially since it was unique as I've yet to find a poem about the subject before.

This wasn't your best...I loved the other one I commented on.. and to save your perfect 5.0 I won't rate it, for I'll be honest and I"d give it a 4. But hey, it was interesitng, just not my topic or flow to me...But keep it up, you're a great writer.

xDarkSuicidex

Ooo! Very original poem! Congrats on that. =) I liked the flow a lot, and it didn't seem it was too cramped. Good job! Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha