Comments : Fred Smith (True Story)

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacie

    Hey I like this poem, ok I dont like how people feel like that, and get treated like that and stuff. I dont really know if this is a true poem. I dont comment on peoples poems unless they ask me too and I know you didnt ask me too but anyways, up to the part where you say that they say your poems are bad is how I feel, i lost some of my friends because I was too depressed and I supposedly "made them depressed" by being depressed. But I am somewhat over my depression..........lol ok enough with my lifes story.........i liked this poem, it was ..umm.........well interestingly depressingly good. lol well later !
    @---->----- Nicho9123Gurlie@aol.com

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Kady~

    What a horribly wonderful magnificent poem!!!! It was only horrible because I canNOT believe that happens to people around the globe like that! Wow, I like it, it actually made me cry it was so great! (sorry I sound...ah...weird!) Don't be afraid of the future! Be tough for the future! I know you may not believe but if you pray to God and cry for help to Him, He will help you! Put all your worries and problems on Him (and try not to figure out them for yourself) and He will help you! But yeah ANYWHO...sorry bout that! heh SO yeah if ya ever wanna talk (although I have probably scared you by now! hehe) here: katykat_921@hotmail.com
    Yeeup, WONDERFUL POEM! ^_^ V

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    oh Fred, that was really sad.
    I liked the way you wrote this poem.
    you express your thoughts wonderfully.
    keep writing poems.
    you seem really talented.
    wish you the best,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by carmen

    I liked yuor poem and i even cryed when i was reading your poem.i feel wat you where going threw,about how people thougt of you cause you was different from them