Comments : My First Love

  • 18 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Wow. This poem has both touched and inspired me. It's a shame I haven't felt love yet... I wish I was able to write experienced poems such as this one you have written - and if it is not from experienced... shh... no one knows that ^_~. It's an excellent poem, my friend. I love how you repeated: 'You brought me back from the dead' in the beginning of every 2nd stanza. Very nice touch. It really does bring out the true meaning of love; love makes you feel alive. And you have pointed that out very clearly. 5/5, happy new year... ((for when it arrives in 52 minutes lol.))

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)