thats a great poem i really like it lol kinda discriptive lol but thats a GOOD thing lol well check out my poems sometime thanxz :)

Well I didn't expect that ending.

The whole poem was well written.

:)

awwww i know how you feel girl nice poem keep it up 5/5

i LOVED this poem. it was soooo cute aww!! i didnt expect the ending tho.

Hey hun,
Ur poem was really great. i luved it alot it had a lot of meaning into it and i could tell u were really into it..5/5
luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

Very well written! you got your point and emotion out, it was very well written :) great job! 5/5!!

Very well written!! Good job!! Love ya!!