it was a really emotional poem. i've been in that position before, it was my best friend. its glad that you can forgive her. she needs to know how you feel. dont fall out over a lad. keep writing, i think that you've got a real talent. 5/5 xxx

hey jos...great poem...hope ur ok..ur last day today (im at school)...ill c u soon. love u heaps x xx

ahh...ive had had friends with experiences like these....anyways...nice poem..very well expressed :D

wow great poem...a little long but i loved it....you definetly got the pooint across....anyways great poem...plz comment on mine...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

wow. that poem is very... deep and sad. i hope this isnt a true story, because that is not kewl. love can make a dangerous turn in our lives. just be careful with what you do.
great poem and you are very talented. i loved it!
keep up the fantastic work!
Lia Jnell
(PS: id show this poem to maggie)

well done... this is one of the best poems iv eva read... keep them cuming xxxx

I agree with all the other comments, I just don't want to copy what they wrote :) Great poem :)