Wow. Very well done. This definately had a deep meaning in it about life. I liked it a lot. It really summed up the value of life, and how much we take it for granted.

The flow was ok, but here and there, there could be a few fixes. The imagery was great though. I really knew what you were talking about and it really caught my eye. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Great poem keep up the good work.5/5