Comments : I fall apart

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    My last breakup was really, truly horrible (and lasted for two months) and this poem sums up exactly what it felt like at first. I know now that my ex was just a pathetic pig, but sometimes you really do need time to see things clearly. It's like being too close to something to read the words clearly, you just have to back up.

    ON the upside, I'm now in a relationship with the greatest guy I've ever known...:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Oh yeah...I forgot, in that little novella of mine, to tell you that you did another awesome job. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by cindy

    very nice - you captured emotions with that one - keep it up!