OHMYGOD! I absolutely LOVE this. You are an INCREDIBLE writer. <33 Just pure talent. =) So beautiful. This was really great. Especially the last 6 stanzas. SO touching. =*) Fantastic work! <3 Keep at it. Please. xoxoxox

-Mortalidaga
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Whoa! That is so beautiful. It's flowed perfectly! I absolutely loved it....

But in all honesty I must say that "So late some summer's evening" did throw it off a bit. It just sounds a bit funny....

Other than that this is an excellent write!! Truly amazing!! ;)

Oh wow really awseome!