this is really good. you should feature it.

Hey hun, i really liked this..5/5 keep up the great work
luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

Hey hun, i really liked this..5/5 keep up the great work
luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

Very well written poem! I really can relate to the second stanza a lot! You captured many emotions and your word choice was great! Take Care! Brooke~

i really liked this one. it flowed really well. keep it up!
crystal

i can see where you're going its very VERY well written, it also reminds me of hoobastanks song, newayz great write, definately worth the read, 5/5

Definetly another 5/5 omg i love all of ur poems lol there amazing! keep up the good work

Very meaningful poem. I liked that you kept with the same ryhme scheme throughout the poem. Well thought out and written!

Very nicely done.. the title reminded me of a Hoobastank song. I could tell you were a little confused in writing this poem. It did jump from place to place.