I really like this poem. I can totally relate. You are truly talented, keep writing, and don't give up. I can really feal your pain through this poem, it's like my life story. Continue to write.

This was a completely awesome poem. I loved it.

-Taylor

So please do not you walk away from me
Do not question, ask or fear
Just hold me and listen
That is all you need to do, to keep me here

I love this part especially, i can relate to this poem very much, the guy i love don't even there to look at me what more talk to me.