i think this poem is delicately balanced in portraying not only what you want, but what you are afraid of recieving. I think you write these words out of a lack of such a feeling, and that you measure your happiness in love and your sadness in disapointment. I feel like a bad critic, but I honestly loved your poem. I think it's worthy of professional recognition, and that it states your desire clearly, which makes it easy to not only relate to but similarly share that feeling of needing a trustworthy source of undying affection. Not that us guys would know too much about that, though......
great job regardless, 5/5