Once again, this poem is very good. It creates a great visual for the mind. I applaud you for such great writting.

wow i loved it it was great ; and i hardly ever like love poems but this one Rox my Sox {lol}
~HazE

Beautiful!

Hey great poem it made me cry

luves,
luves4eva

Awww so sweet. i like the emotion you put into this. great job.

Cool...do you have her now? it't her lose if she doesn't accept you...you are a great guy...and all your comments are very much appreciated it...and for my grammar...that's what i need help with...so if you can correct my mistake...do so okey...thanks a lot.