great poem. thanks for the comments glad that u like them. thanks for adding me to ur favs
god bless
amanda

dumb nothing any1 ever writes is dumb lol i loved it dont worry if u can write this romaticly in a sad type of way then just write in a happy kinda way and show her or a soon to come her and she'll love it i know i would well loved the poem well check out my poems sometime thanxz :)

hey joey, that was absolutely brilliant.
I enjoyed reading it. was that true?
wish you eternal happiness,
marjan

it wasn't dumb!!!!! i enjoyed reading it very much!!! and as Angel said, keep on holding on to God he would help u more than anyone while u believe.
And I really hope u're feeling a little better ^^
thanks for commenting on my stuff i really appreciate it ;)

take care!

pili