Very good poem...all these thoughts that you have could be organized a little better though...i find it confusing kinda when i look at the organization of the poem... it tends to distract people from the good words that you are trying to have come out..... only my thought though...anyway besides that nice job... it would be a 5/5 from me but the way it is set brought me down one....but besides the organization it would be an awesome poem....thanks for commenting on mine...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

i was captivated by your poem lol. i like it a lot.

omg again another poem i feel exactly like this has to stop happenin lol well i know what u mean lookin at the blade then your wrist woundering where to cut if to or not dont u dont deserve to live like this keep writing if only for the sake of it well check out my poems sometime thanxz :)

this is somewhat how i feel. it has a lot of meanings and i really like the poem.

hey ab
good poem i really liked it
love soph

very nice poem, have a 5

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

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Awesome poem...i feel the same way all the time, except i let the blade find my skin most of the time...well ur an awesome poet, keep it up! comment some of my poems some time, thankx!! take care..
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Beautiful poem :)
you're such an awesome writer, i love your stuff
take care xx