This is a kickass poem I like it A LOT!

At the beginning, you were goin really strong.. the language madeway for the image of what u were writing,.. then it seems like it breaks off somewhere in the middle and just sounded weird to me.. maybe its the contrasting language or maybe im crazy.. this seemed a bit forced\/,.. overall good piece th0, does tell a story and it might just not be my style..

That dragon needs some time off,
Being raucous full time is hard enough,