hey... thanks for all yout comments... this is a very sad poem... very deep... great flow and rhyming... keep up the good work =)

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

god i hate child abuse....it makes me wanna cry sumtimes...5/5 always.

this is so sad i almost cried

Hey, this is a really sad poem but you've written it beautifuly.
Well Done
<3 Charli XxX

Awww ;o
Is it true?
If it is then your 1 brave girl!
Love
•Emma•

great poem.really sad keep it up.Ive never really been abused but i wish abusers will stop they dont have a clue how much they ruin peoples lives

i dont know how anyone could abuse there child especially when there so young,great poem

omg this poem is amazing but so sad i have never really been abused or atleast not bad but i am comepletely against child abuse or anykidn of abuse its just wrong and anyone who does abuse someone shoudl eb punished severly your poem brought tears to my eyes lol keep up the good writin i hope this never happend to you
lots of love
☼Becky☼

Very awesome poem. Very sad. I know what it feels like to be abused (my father used to hit my sister and I). I do hope this poem gets noticed and makes a point in society. Wonderful job. Keep writing!

Loved your poem..very sad..Im against abuse 10000%..its just wrong..5/5!

<333 Katie

omg this was a great poem.
it was so sad.
it made me think of my 4 and 5 year old sister and them getting hurt.

Very sad..but also very good!! Great job!! You have talent!! Keep writing!! 5/5

Girl,
it's fantastic that you wrote a poem about child abusement, it's really good!
I'm against it, and know a girl who's my age, and who's being abused by her father... We (my friends and I) try tohelp her as much as we can... So people, do something against it!!!

It's really sad but it's just soo damn beautiful!
Nicely written with all the emotions stuck to it!
I love it!

xxx

Omg!!!!! Sooooooooooo sad!!!! I almost cried. I love it!!! You should make it into a chain letter that is like against child abuse.

omg amazing poem it is so sad to think that this happenz it makes u want to stop the world and throw all abuserz off i kno how it feelz to b blamed and i hope that someday it will stop and people will learn to think keep up the good work 5/5 def!!

hey larochelle.. great poem, very touching.. i agree 100% that child abuse is horrible.

5/5

amanda

I loved your poem, but it was one of the saddest poems on this sight that I have read, brought tears to my eyes. Hope things get better. with love BloodRedRose

Wow this is a good poem! comment on mine it called Never!!!thanx

.... im actually crying.... so awesome!!