crey cute poem , great job~whittney

Great write, I love your structure that makes the words flow. Though the poem is so short it has much intensity, last line is my fave, brillantly described :-)

Keep it up
Lots of love
Sabine

P.S.: Please, read some work of mine and comment and vote, too. Thanks.

I really like your writings good work....

That poem is really creative i love all of the ideas you throw at the reader nice imagination.
~sarah

This is very short, but it convey's so much. I like the usage of color, it adds to the brilliance of this piece~Holly

Short, sweet and loving........