Strong write. The 4th stanza is my fave one. Though I can understand what you mean I can't understand the last line of your poem, because when someone is so selfish and stuck-up, why do you want him/her to like you then ?

Keep up writing such great work :)
Lots of love
Sabine

great poem! loved it! thnx 4 ur comments :) and i suppose thats life, some people cant see you, for who you really are...take care

love mark xxx