Comments : Thinking....

  • 18 years ago

    by DANI

    this is a very meaning full poem i wrote about my ex....he will always be with me in my heart....

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    WOW!!!
    this bit was brilliant it really caught my eye....
    "i am finished with all those nasty words,
    and I'm gonna fly as high as a bird".

    brilliant!
    Hayley-Ree xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Cute write, espacially the first 5 lines about thinking were pretty good.

    Keep it up, hope to read more such great stuff from you .
    Lots of love
    Sabine

    P.S.: Please, read some of my work and comment, too. Thanks.