aww this is a really sweet poem. *goes and votes it a five* and is your name paco or frank? guessing it's frank but i get confused easily : ) anyways keep up the good work!
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wow yet another good poem I liked it alot, you are a very good poet, great job 5/5

<3 jess

I'm adding you to my favorites!! you are so good at writing how you feel..dont give up writing

kaylee

I really liked your poem. I hope you continue commentin on my poems. Sa far as for yours I will comment them too

GREAT POEM..REally romantic..! keep it up..:D..love Valeria..!

Awwwwwwwwww........It was cute. :) Yep yep yep...* Great flow and great diction. I really like it. :) Oh and thanks for the suggestion on my poem. I fixed it up a bit..tell me if it is better! :)