omg that is so sad i loved it it was great i think that you did a really good job writing it

hi, you really did a great job :)
I know exactly how you feel
5/5 Ofcourse for this lovely writing, keep on the good work
Please comment on mine too
Milou

GOOD JOB GIRL!!! YOU GOT TALENT!!!!read my poems i hate you and no more waiting on you okay NICE JOB YOU ROCK!!!!

WOW! GREAT POEM! IT REALLY HIT THE HEART! GREAT JOB! BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES! SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING I HAD TO TELL MY EX WHEN HE COULDNT DECIDE WHO HE WANTED AND WENT BACK AND FORTH BETWEEN ME AND ANOTHER WHEN HE THOUGHT HE DECIDED ON ME YOUR WORDS ARE EXACTLY HOW I FELT! 5!

this poem reminds of of my twins father he was the same way until i told him that we were having a baby n wen i told him twins his face lit up with joy. i am not saying go get prego but he acted the same way i would cry myself to sleep cause i thought that he hated me.but when i told him that i was pregnant.thats when he told me that he loved me.n he was afraid to tell me n he was afraid to settle down with me cause he thought i would leave him but now he really knows how much i love him n our family.n if u wondering i have a boy n a girl
my sons-alejavier carlos michael garcia
my daughter-yajaira isabel marie garcia
,i hope u feel better bout this guy womens hearts are so fragile they dont need to b broken anymore my men mainly by the ones that we are so in love with that we will do anything for them

yea um can u comment on my poems at GtnsBbyGrl plzzzz thank you

very well written .. i enjoyed it .. keep up the good work .. =) take a lok at my poems if u get the chance .. =)

I LOVED this poem. This describes exactly what I am going thru..even tho I havent let go yet. I try..but then he always says something to keep me in his life. I know he would rather be somewhere else tho..which is what makes it so hard to keep going. Your poem inspired me, thank you!

I love this poem sheest!! It is soo cute, I've never read it before. You are soo talented!! I miss writing poems with you!! I wish you were here!

This poem was amazing, no lie. It put my last relationship into words and I didn't think that that was possible. I like your writing, keep it up.