this is great!! thanks 4 ur comment hun!! this poem is so inspirational!! 5/5 xxxxxx

very nice. very powerful. i like teh fourth stanza. well written ^.^

Wow... I found this very gripping. This tells a lot, almost like an entire novel. I'm going to read more of your work. Thanks for your comment, but please keep working you've got it!!

amazing!!! keep it up!
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It's Great! You have an original structure that you put some beautiful lines to, and the repetitiveness really pushed it along. The last lines summed up the point and left you thinking of that truly deep love.
Absolutely Great Job!

luv kt

great poem! i agree with ^^^ lol the repitition was effective 5/5

love mark xxx

Whoa u are amazing i loved this one i coulg imagine everything throughout the poem
keep on writing cause u r an axcelent writer

pili