Verry good!! i know exactly how you are feeling or "were" feeling great job

That was very good, nice word choice and excellent emotions!!

That honestly was very good! I felt the pain and emotion and i love the wording and description! Great JoB!

Awwwwww! ^_^ great job, i love it!

Great poem. great use of words and emotion! keep strong and im me if u eva wanna chat my msn is hi_how_r_u_16@hotmail.com
love jess XXX

That was really cute, great emotion in it too, xoxo Rach