Great poem. one of your best I think.
you're really talented.
take care,
marjan

I can not express how much I enjoyed this poem. you did a great job on this one. the flow was just excellent.
I specially loved this part:
Hopefully, though, one day
We can surpass life's dismay
And find peace in the truth we set astray...

And then with some joyous cheers
We can erase reason for tears
And we can live peacefully every day.

much love and happiness,
marjan