SAD IF TRUE...BUT ALL AND ALL I LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...

So sad. I liked the way you wrote it.
wish you the best,
marjan

Hey there, gah I havent talked to you in forever! how have u been? anyways....I lik this poem, its sad, but i lik it. ummm Im not crazy bout the structure though... with the line then the - then 2 words....lol.....what? if you changed it and added more, i dont really know what else more, but somethin, would make it a tad better but i lik it....the ending was kinda unexpecting i was all :0 @ the end lol but yea :( so, yea.....i guess ill ttyl...maybe
~Mal