This was very good!! I hope you know that your dad is always with you in someway!! And you will always have those memories you talked about, and no one can EVER take them away from you!! I hope you are aright!! Keep writing!! 5/5

awwww **hugs** very sad poem, but it is very good also, 5/5 frm me, keep it up...

rach
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omg ur poems are amazing this is so sad i feel for you...keep ur chin up! great work!

Beautiful... i thought about giving this to my dad as my family thinks he has an alcohol problem. just to show him how i'd feel if he died. i know it doesnt mean much coming from a stranger but i'm sorry for your dad. hopefully this is only making you a stronger person. he would have wanted you to benefit from this in any way you could and i'm sure he'd be proud of you by staying strong and not just using it as an excuse for depression. you've inspired me to try to be happier and i thank you for that. very much.
much love,
-A

~*~OMG~*~ i am in tears...i am so sorry i am here for you!!!! this is a awesome poem keep it up please comment back on my only poem so we can stay in touch.. i luv ur work *stay strong too*
luv always and forever
shelby

Hey Michelle, having lost my sister in a car accident and my best friend from suicide, I know how hard it is. You are a great writer and an even greater person. I respect people with your sense of kindness. Your father would be very proud of you. Keep up the good work and keep in touch. With much love and respect, Braxton

Wow ur a great writer i love your poems
they're deep but great well ima bounce catchya
~much love~
*katii*

Thats such a beautiful poem. i love every word...awesome...