Hey Amanda that's really good i like it it's really goody!!!!! well look at mine kk bye

*Christina*

very nice and very well put.

Great job!! This poem had a lot of feeling!! Keep writing!! I know how you feel!! 5/5

im such a deep writer but theres just something about you that pulls me to you. also i love how u dont rhyme in yours i always thought you needed to ryhme in my case but i felt the rhythem in yours with such peace and grace. i love it.

i loved it..ur such a great writer...u inspirer me to keep writing...keep up the great work....

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