hey, that made me stop and read it again... keep up the good work =)
i loved the end of the first paragraph... If in pain are you in peace? Is the smile you have then real?... great job

*jackie*

too true babs, too true
he he, brilliant poem
5/5
love you, and thankyou for being there
wilmawoo
xx

Beautifully written, missed ur stuff...tlk soon, keep it up! xXx

Great poem, full of hope and strength.x