Comments : In my heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Soo cute, truly . I liked it how most of your lines rhymed that in such a way your words got more significance. This poem of yours moved me deeply, because I know how you've felt and still feel, because my first bf's moved to America two years ago that in such a way I couldn't see him since that time. Great work !
    The second stanza is my fave one.

    Lots of love
    Sabine

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica V Loves U

    Thanks for the comment.