Comments : New Tattoo

  • 18 years ago

    by jaki

    great job, i loved the way you repeated the first lines on the last... keep up the good work

    *jackie*

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Slam...you're not in that situation...are you???

    You better not be!

    I liked the rhyming scheme...and the meaning, the words, everything about it. :)

    I just hope you're doing okay...

    LOVE ALWAYS HUNNNY!!!!!! <333333

    Peaces. //Ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    *HUNNY

    Lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Very true what you said, sticking around will only make things worse. Unfortunatley when you've only known abuse it seems a far cry to walk away and forget about it.
    The title of the poem is perfect. "Tattoo" - emphasising the permanent scars inflicted on ones body and heart. It's a tragic way to live a life - But so many swallow the pain and deal with it; for the real world is all to difficult to handle.

    Take care my friend <333.
    I'm always here for you no matter what or where.

    Luv yah,
    - Kalah.