Everybody has a different opinion, especially about the war going on now. I know its not what you wrote about but...Personally, I don't think people like the idea of how this poem is written.."this soldier died for you".

honestly I don't feel like a soldier died for me. It's just my opinion. I do have to say... the other parts in the poem truly touched my heart. I share in sympathy with every grieving soul out there who lost a loved one, be him/her a soldier or not.

Peace always
JJ

Very patriotic poem here. All of those soldiers died for the better and freedom of those who still grace this earth today - And it would be extremely nice to see people cherishing life and it's freedoms. Instead of abusing it and blaming others.
Nicely written my friend.

Luv always and forever.
// Kalah.

This was a patriotic poem and I enjoyed it, as a poem i think it was well written and you were not restricted by rhymes, well done and keep up the good work