This poem was good. I could see the direction of it. I still lke you oher one a little better though MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! lmbo! Keep up the good work though!.....

-Frank

awww lovely, completely sums up love !

i think its really pretty, you can tell its comin from how you feel inside, i base my poems on experiences and how i feel at that present time. good work keep it up xxx

Hey YOU! how u doin, lol
I like this poem, its soo cool.
I like the technique, the repition of I cant begin to describe, its a phrase that doesnt get tiering, so good job, enjoyed it :)

~Peace And Love~
Francisco

wow this is one of ur best...its awsome its shows how u feel and emotion its greart keep up the good work