Very good, you can feel the emotion coming through the words!

Ha ha oops posted the comment on my own poem -- oops sorry that comment was for another poem lol.

LOL But that's ok I can feel the emotion comig through the words. I evisioned this poems while I was reading it. This poems is truely worth a 5/5. I also have poems of my own, that I would be glad if you rate and comment on them of you have time. "Only You" is one of my widely seem poems, but if you could check out "Only You" and my others ones, I would be thankful. Thanx alot, and keep up the great work!

-Frank :D

Great Poem. Well written, Nice Job
~Smile Always~
Gina

Thats such a nice poem..It had a great flow and good rhyming scheme aswell..

Thats an awesome poem,GREAT WORK...keep it up!!!