5/5 you are a great writer you brought tears to my eyes keep up the good work and please return the favor of commenting on my poems

Emmaleigh

That was really good but sad

Holy cow! This poem rocks. I read quite a few of yours. I love how well your poems flow. Your emotion is portrayed so well. You can get your thoughts in a beautiful flowing melody of rhymes. That is something a lot of people have a hard time with. You are so talented. Dont give up poetry. You are truly gifted. Great write! 9/5! (lol I wish) Keep up the talent!

okay that was very well written, I liked how your stanzas were short but oh so powerful.

the ending was great i loved the engraved part, the only other thing I say other than the flow rocked is that this line "And split to two" could be changed to flow better and maybe be easier to read the stanza..maybe change "to" into "into"?

Just a thought.

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Awsome poem, I'm a true fan. And this is definatly one of the best! Continue writing and I will continue reading!

That's really depressing. *hug* I'm sorry... I liked this piece, because you really unleashed your feelings here (which is cruical to poetry - poems without feeling are just words on paper). Great job.

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Thats so sad, I know how hard it is to go through a brakeup. Anyway, this is a really good poem. I can't find anything wrong with it...Great work