Vet cute and well written poem:) keep it up:D

Best wishes,
Patrik

It takes a lot to admit something like this, and I really admire that. This poem was beautifully written. <3 Very touching and honest. It's hard to always keep a promise, and most promises are exaggerated if you look at it. (Not your promises, I mean promises in general). All in all, I loved this poem. Each stanza was just like, wow. <3

One teeny error m'dear : "should'nt" :}

<3 Love you girl, so much :-)

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

ps. You've never hurt me or let me down, even if you did, I'd still be here for you, and still smile that I had you as such a great friend. <3 Love you.

You have amazing talent

It sure is hard to admit when you've lied about something, especially to your best friend. This poem makes it seem so easy.

JJ

This was really good and I know how it feels..and how much you can regret it.
The flow was great and I enjoyed reading it :)