Comments : If I

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Aww, that poem was sweet and rlly sad at the same time. Great technique,

    Thanks for your comments on my poem,
    Francisco

  • 18 years ago

    by kat

    omg thats so sad but true i kno how it feels i may be young but iv known someone sinse i was born and sometimes it feels like ur life will come crashing down but u gotta keep ur head up and keep writing ur really good at it