awww this is so sad... so this is tru? I'm so sorry to hear about that. this poem is truly amazing. At first I didn't get it, then after the thrid or forth line down I got it. lol. *5* great job.

yh it is true n thanks:)

Wow, this really brought a tear to my eye! It was so sad yet tell a story, you put one hell of a lot of emotion into this and it is written very well.
The flow was great and everything went well.
Im sorry for your loss, It must be very hard..
Stay strong xxx

Lol thanks i just write what i feel

Thanks baby :P n i know ur here 4 me n love u 2:P glad u like it

That was so sad....thanxz for the comment i just got back on and i loved it thanxz again and keep writing you'll get better and better thats all you can do at this point...become better