I agree with Noni, this poem could flow better but not all good poems have to rhyme. i like the idea behind the poem and i really like angel poem! you did a good job with it but it could be better possibly. if you fix it up let me know and if you need suggestions on what parts to fix i can also try to help with that. but ou did a good job with it and i love how you ended it!

~Jacklyn

Jacklyns right not all poems have to rhyme but the flow was off it is good any way