Comments : As I Sleep

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Length never matters dear, and this...this is AMAZING. It's SO powerful. <3 A nice little twist that is very effective. =) Great work. I love you doll, always here for you. <3 xoxox

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCareHunxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I like the twist :)

    the poem is short but deep..

    a well enjoyed read!

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by rachel

    hey this is good enough that length reli dusnt matter, well written, emotional and powerful 5/5 xxx